Friday, May 17, 2013

Final Paper: Evil Children

                                               Evil Children


The movies, “The Ring”, “The Exorcist”, and “The Woman in Black” all have something in common.  They all feature an evil child. It seems our culture has a great obsession with this kind of horror; Americans alone spend billions of dollars a year viewing these movies. Last year, “The Woman In Black” had a gross income of around $54,322,273 and the movie “The Exorcist” as of 2003 had a grossed over $204,565,000 since 1973 (IMBD).  When we look into horror films it seems our culture is extremely frightened by this idea of evil children. Even the mere presence of a child’s toy tends to have us at the edge of our seats. When you type scary movies into a search engine such as Google, with kids is the first auto-fill answer to pop up. We, as a society, find children most frightening in horror films due to our cultures view of children being angelic and innocent, and the hidden messages these evil children display.

                                  Value Of Our Children

  Our culture places a great amount of value on children and finds nothing more innocent and precious than a child. Some of our most controversial topics are about children and to many people their proudest achievement is their child. Our society is extremely over protective over children and when something happens to a child we find it completely devastating. An example of this is the recent Connecticut elementary school shooting. When this tragedy happened it did not just affect the town that this unfortunate incident happened in, but also our entire country was left completely numb and shocked by this tragedy. Everything we have ever known is that children are innocent and helpless and that we should do everything we can to protect them. In a scary movie when we see a child that is inherently evil, we don’t know what to do and want to help the child but at the same time, they are evil. There is the possibility that they could harm us, and that is terrifying. What is the origin of these horrifying children and how did this popular idea of evil children start? In Karen Renners article, Evil Children In Film and Literature: Notes Toward a Genealogy, she explains how in the 1950’s, the idea of evil children as chilling characters really started to grip America. In the 1950’s children were portrayed as being born evil in horror novels (80). This all started with novels like Ray Bradburns, The Small Assassin where a newborn is born with the desire to kill. These babies have no motives or reasons for their desires to kill; they just do (80). The 1960’s then brings us to examine the psychological forces and family dynamics that might produce an evil child rather than the child being born inherently evil (81). Novels like Shirley Jacksons, We Have Always Lived in the Castle, is about an 18-year-old girl who confesses to murdering her family 6 years before this theme started to become increasingly popular (81). One woman, Ira Levin’s decided to go back to the more popular approach from the decade before and wrote Rosemary’s Baby, a story about the son of Satan, who was born as an evil child (81). This novel became a huge hit and by the 1970’s and 1980’s, authors hoped to take advantage of the popularity of evil children and created immense amounts of texts, while directors took advantage of this as well and started to offer cinematic versions (82). Because both types of evil children “the satanic and the psychological deviant” were such a hit the directors explored both types (82). The first big hit of the satanic genera was of course, The Exorcist (82). Also Thomas Tryon’s bestselling novel, The Other, offered psychological rather than satanic corruptions for the child (82). The child of this novel, Niles, commits a series of violent acts that he blames on his twin, whom is later discovered dead (82). Tryon’s focus on insanity rather than the demonic possession of a child “helped set the stage for later texts that would increasingly examine childhood manifestations of dangerous derangement” (82). Renner also states that according to Gary Hoppenstand, the author of Exorcising the Devil babies: Images of Children and Adolescents in the Best-Selling Horror Novel, has argued that these early text were largely responsible for moving horror from a minor genre to a mainstream concern (83). This is where we find the origination of horror movies as we know them. Today film directors still use both of these types of children, the satanic and the psychological deviant in their horror films, and they both still have the same horrifying, yet addicting effect on their audience. But how did these views of evil children really start.

                                 Puritan Vs. Romantic Period

To have a better understanding how these evil children concepts were started, we have to know where these thoughts derived from. From the 1600’s to the 1700’s was the Puritan age and was really when the idea of evil children started. Moran and Vinovskis state in their article, The Great Care Of Godly Parents: Early Childhood In Puritan New England, that the puritans did love their children but they were considered evil until they were converted into Christians, and babies and children who died without being converted were considered damned (25). Children were thought to be filled with sin and “puritan parents sought to counteract original sin in children by breaking and beating down their wills” (26). This method of parenting most likely lasted quite a number of years (26). In the early seventeenth century English minister and the pilgrim pastor, John Robinson also shared his child-rearing ideas (26). In a piece he wrote titled, Of Children and Their Education, he writes, “And surely there is all children, though not alike, a stubbornness and stoutness of mind arising from natural pride, which must, in the first place, be broken and beaten down (26).” The puritan view started to change around 1769 when the Romantic period began. The Romantic period is when children began to be viewed how we perceive them today as innocent and angelic. Jacqueline Banerjee writes in her article, Ideas of Childhood in Victorian Children’s Fiction: The Child as Innocent, The “cult of the child” really started to flourish in England when William Blake and other Romantics expressed it in their poetry. Wordsworth, another poet, also played a huge role on the holiness of the child, Banerjee states; Both Blake and Wordsworth “give the joyful, pure-hearted, and inspirational figure of the child added poignancy by contrasting it with the world of experiencing which lies in wait for it.” The image of children as innocent and redemptive can also be found in many different Victorian Period works such as Charles Dickens’s books, Oliver Twist and The Old Curiosity Shop (Banerjee). Our current view of children conforming along the lines of the Romantic Period is exactly why these evil children scare us. We have been raised to love and cherish children and not think they are evil. When a child is shown as evil in a horror film our bodies are put into disequilibrium and we do not know how to react.

                                 Technology and The Ring


To get a better feel to what exactly these haunted children do in horror films to scare us I watched and analyzed the movies The Ring and The Exorcist. The film The Ring is about a young girl, Samara, that haunts people through a video and anyone who views this video gets a phone call telling them they will die in seven days, and seven days later Samara comes and kills them (The Ring). After watching The Ring we begin to wonder why this little girl scares us so much. The Ring plays on the audience’s emotions in many different ways. One way The Ring plays on our emotions is through the use of electronic devices. The Ring uses televisions as a way of transport and telephones as a way to inform someone that they are going to die. Our culture views these items as safe and when people are scared, they usually turn on their TV to distract them or call someone on their phone, but The Ring portrays both of these items as dangerous. In Jacques Derrida’s short clip, The Science of Ghosts, he talks about how technology symbolizes ghosts and with our society being so saturated with technology; we are now bringing more ghosts into our world (Derrida). I feel The Ring is also sending this message to our culture, but instead of telling us this they are showing it. In Valerie Wee article, Patriarchy and the Horror of the Monstrous Feminine: A comparative study of Ringu and The Ring essays she states that Samara’s use of television and videotapes as an outlet for her vengeance is because it is all that Samara had use of to access the outside world while she was locked in the barn (160). The Ring may be telling us that even though we view these items as safe they really are not. Our culture has become so technologically reliant that we forget all of the bad things that become of them; such as our society slowly becoming less and less sociable, the influences the media has on us, and that with just one click we have the accessibility to know everything about someone instantaneously.  
By far the scariest feature of The Ring offers is Samara. Samara is a cute little girl with long black hair and big brown eyes who seems so innocent, yet is the base of this horror film. During the movie Samara is asked, “You don’t want to hurt anyone do you?” She replies with, “But I do, and I’m sorry, it won’t stop (The Ring).” Samara represents the ultimate form of evil for a child.
Samara’s ability to frighten people so easily makes us question if there is something about girls that makes them more frightening in scary movies. Many movies tend to use young girls instead of boys as the center of their horror. The Ring may be representing how young women tend to hold anger. In our society we usually view girls as being more dramatic and less forgiving then men. Valarie Wee states, The Ring’s central horror revolves around the realization that this evil female force cannot be neutralized or contained even “over her dead body,” for Samara’s ghost returns and defies all attempts to defeat her (161). Samara’s horror is founded on her abjection, which she displays in life, and then is confirmed in death” (161). Valerie Wee also analyzed both the Japanese and American version of The Ring and Ringu. She says “The figure of the vengeful female is a particularly common trope in patriarchal cultures and frequently appears in both Hollywood and Japanese horror films” (152). Ringu the Japanese movie’s gender comes from the tradition of the Japanese female ghost, expressing a growing masculine anxiety about contemporary Japan and the undermining of the gender roles (152). Where the American version of The Ring is featuring more of what the American cultures views of gender are in general and the popular representations of gender in movies (152).  Valerie Wee states, our culture has a long tradition of associating the female with motherhood, monstrosity and or death (159). The Ring uses three primary females, Samara, Rachel, and Anna and they all clearly have these traits between them (159). Samara represents monstrosity in both life and death and her evilness is depicted right from the beginning (159). Wee states, that The Ring portrays Samara “as simply and unambiguously the embodiment of destructive, supernatural evil (160).” Anna is a woman “whose desire for motherhood ends disastrously” (159) after the Morgan’s adopt Samara, Anna starts to complain about terrible visions with Samara around (159). These visions end up making her go completely mad and she finally submits to her daughter’s evil powers and murders her daughter (159). “The Ring constructs both Anna and Samara as irrational, unnatural and destructive (female) forces (159)” Wee also explains that Anna is Samara’s tormenter in the sense that she locks her daughter up in the stable before murdering her. Though Anna is also a victim of Samaras unnatural visions, (159) this leaves Richard, Anna’s husband and Samaras father, trapped between these women (159). Richard who seems to not be affected by Samaras visions tries to solve the problem by first locking her in the stable and when that does not work he sends her to a psychiatrist to try to help her (160). Valarie Wee explains, The Ring “Overtly and actively equates the female with irrationality, insanity and evil, pitting her against the male who is aligned with logic and reasoning” (Wee 160) Samara represents pure evil and there is nothing anyone can do to take that away from her. This is terrifying to us as a culture because we view everyone as “fixable”, especially children. When we see a misbehaving child we usually think they will grow out of it or they can get help to fix their problem. Never do we just loose hope in them, but with Samara there’s nothing we can do and the only way to save yourself is to hand the video onto someone else. Samara is a representation that even children can carry anger with them and that nothing anyone can do will ever make her anger stop.

                                   Messages To Our Culture

These horror films may be a message to our culture that any unresolved issues we have should be dealt with. In Dino Felluga’s essay, Modules on Freud: One the Unconscious, Fellugas summarizes Freud’s view on the unconscious. According to Freud, “Humanity’s very movement into civilized society requires the repression of our primitive desires”(Fellugas). Freud says in one of his essays Civilization and Its Discontents, that our society is a “substitute-formation for our instincts and drives”(Fellugas). Freud believed that there is a relationship between the child’s development and the development of the species (Fellugas). “The prehistory into which the dream-work leads us back is of two kinds-on the one hand, into the individuals prehistory, his childhood, and on the other, in so far as each individual somehow recapitulates in an abbreviated form the entire development of the human race, into phylogenetic prehistory too” Fellugas). Fellgas explains that Freud also says it is the “insistent return of the repressed that can explain numerous phenomena that are normally overlook: not only our dreams but also what has come to be called “Freudian Slips” ”A Freudian Slip is a “Slip of the tongue or a slip of the pen.” James Reason describes this slip in his article, The Freudian Slip Revisited as, “A slip is the product both of a local opportunity from the particular circumstances and of a struggle between two mental forces: some underlying need or wish and the desire to keep it hidden” (610). These horror films really center around the idea of the “Freudian Slip” in the sense that most people in a horror film have something that they do not want to bring to the surface, whether it is a broken family, a hidden desire, or secrets from the past. These horror films then bring these repressed memories to the surface by the form of an evil child coming into their life. The “Freudian Slip” can also be seen in an evil child, as we find with Samara. Samara tried to repress the powers she had and keep them hidden but when she was killed by her mother all of her repressed powers came back to her and she became a murderous child. These horror films may be trying to show us that repressing our unresolved issues only hurts us in the end and we need to do something about them before it is too late. 

                                The Sexuality Of The Child

The Exorcist, follows a different path then The Ring in the way that the director plays with the audience’s feelings. The film, The Exorcist is about a young girl, Regan, who has been possessed by an evil being who claims to be the “devil” (The Exorcist). The Exorcist starts out by showing how sweet Regan is. They show her laughing and playing with her mother and they show how much they care for each other. When Regan starts to become possessed it brings out a parent’s worst fear, which is that this could happen to their own child if it could happen to a child as sweet as Regan. As Reagan’s features change the screen becomes almost hard to look at, especially during scenes when Reagan is showing sexual deviation. The few scenes when Regan is displays this, we find this completely repulsive. A child is not supposed to even know about the things that Regan does to herself. We cannot even fathom a child saying and doing the things she does and giving us the idea in our head that a child could do this disturbs us. Sigmund Freud did much research on the sexuality of children. In George Klein’s essay Freud’s Two Theories of Sexuality he explains that Freud had evidence “That a number of children, a much greater than one would imagine, seem to show interest at an early age in sexual matters and to find pleasure in them”(139). According to Freud this sexuality occurred much before puberty in children (140). This being said, when we see Regan on screen portraying these sexual behaviors, it shows Freud’s studies to be true, and as a culture knowing that our young children may also be developing this is a very frightening thought.

                                       Who's To Blame? 

In Renner article, Evil Children in Film and Literature II: Notes Toward a Taxonomy she explains what causal factors bring a child to become possessed. She states, a possessed child often has less to do with the child who remains innocent and more to do with his or her parents (179). Renner explains, a possession “either draws the family back together or magnifies the issues that caused fracture in the first place”(179). The family may look like victims of a supernatural presence possessed, but possessed children narratives usually show that the child has been made vulnerable because of the breakdowns in the family unit (Renner179).  Renner states that, “Possession narrative act as cautionary tales that warn us, in symbolic terms, that children are vulnerable to dangerous influences when traditional family structures are damaged and parents are negligent in their duties”(180). Even The Exorcist points to a failed family structure. Regan’s parents are divorced and her father takes no parental responsibilities and Regan’s mother is a successful actress who employs several people to care for Regan while she works. Renner explains that paid childcare is no substitute for the careful eye of a parent (181). The Novel Regan-as-a Demon condemns Regan’s mother for putting her career before her child and says, “It is you who have done it! Yes you with your career before your career before anything, your career before your husband, before her”(181). Regan’s possession does force her mother to become a stay at home mother to take care of Regan and her mother soon learns that she needs to put motherhood before her job and Regan then returns to her normal state (181). Renner states that, “This could suggest that contamination can be removed if a child is given “proper” parental attention in time to rescue him or her (181). Renner’s points make it quite obvious to why we would be so frightened of these children. Our society is very much for equal rights, which has many women now working full time and many children are in daycare. Seeing these movies frightens people making them question their parenting. Also with our society’s 50 percent divorce rate, many children are left with separated parents (Bohlin34) The thought that your child could become possessed because you are too busy with your job or you and your significant other got a divorce would be enough to scare anyone. I think these movies are trying to tell our society something, I believe they are trying to show us the bad things, although usually not as serious as a possession, that could happen if we put our jobs before our families or if we let our family system break down resulting in separation of parents or a different lifestyle for the child.

                                Child’s Toy—The DOLL


Even the mere representation of something as a child’s in a horror film is enough to scare many. One of the biggest devices that horror films use to represent children is a child’s toy. The toys icy glare and disturbing smile staring right at you is enough to give anyone the shivers.  Dominic Lennard author of All Fun And Games.. Children’s Culture in the Horror Film, from Deep Red (1975) to Child’s Play (1988), says “Horrors persistent representation of children with a means to resist adult power has made the iconography of childish fun ironically synonymous with adult fear”(233) Lennard says the most recognizable symbol of children’s culture is the doll. Lennard then talks about how Sigmund Freud’s The Uncanny, addresses the fear of the living doll. Freud points out that dolls are closely connected to childhood life (233). Lennard also points out that Freud explains that children’s games have a distinction between the animate and inanimate where dolls undertake the same status as real people. Freud gathers that, “Children have no fear of their doll coming to life, they may even desire it”(233), and it’s that of these childish beliefs that trouble adults. Freud indicates that the living child’s doll is something that upsets the adult’s sense of power of the child. Lennard states, that the child’s tendency for believing of being captured by phenomena that are unbelievable to adults means the living doll character is able to be understood as a “paranoid demonization of the child’s desire”(234). These dolls present childhood as something other than safe. They create an unhappy space for an adult’s imaginations and one that consolidates their belief of power.
Evil children in horror films are not only a popular adrenaline provoking past time to for our culture, but are also a message to our culture which horrifies many. These films frighten our society because of our cultures value of children, the way these children are presented, the messages these movies present to our culture, and the representation of childhood through inanimate objects. These horror films are frightening to our culture for a reason, and instead of being afraid of these films our culture really needs to capture what they are telling us and look at ourselves and make sure we are not doing these things that could so easily hurt us in the end.
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Final Critical Reflective Essay!

In writing my research paper on evil children I had many challenges my first being developing my research question. Developing my research was a bit of a challenge, I knew I wanted to write about children, but that was about as much as I could think of. After doing different activities in class about ghosts and horror films I thought it might be interesting to do research on that as well. So I decided to do a little research on my own about children in horror films and found it very interesting. Finding this so interesting led me to make my research question, why children in horror films tend to scare our culture so much? This was the first research question I thought of doing and luckily my research question has stayed the same. In order to answer my research question I watched and analyzed the movies, The Ring and The Exorcist. Both of these movies helped me tremendously in understanding our cultures views on children and what makes them so frightening to us. I also found many different scholarly sources for my essay, most of them from, Academic Search Complete. I used my articles to support my own thoughts about what I saw happening in these horror films and I also used them to support other ideas I had about our culture view on children. When it comes to my rough draft my peers and teacher helped tremendously. During my first rough draft I became very confused to what I should be doing and was not exactly sure where I was going with my paper. I was very lost, but with the help from my professors comments I was able to find sources that helped me uncover what I was really trying find out. I also made a reverse outline, which helped me unbelievably. My reverse outline helped me to reorganize my thoughts and see where paragraphs would work best in my paper, it also helped me pick out which paragraphs or sentences that really did not belong in my paper and helped me uncover new ideas to talk about in my paper. I found this also really helpful because I was able to jump around to different paragraphs rather than just working on them one at a time. I also made a "revision schedule" for my paper and this helped me to stay on track and to know how much I still needed to do. My teacher also gave me UW-Collages goals and Learning Outcomes and had highlighted many of the goals which I had missed during my rough draft. This helped me focus on what I really needed to work on. For example a goal that was highlighted was to "Cite research in an established documentation style." This made me very aware that I was not doing my MLA citations completely right and I was able to redo what I thought had been correct. Another goal that was highlighted was, "Support a thesis using credible, appropriate, accurate, and sufficient source material." After seeing this and reading my teachers comments I knew that a few sources I had used were not scholarly articles. So I found scholarly articles to support my claim instead. During my time in this course I really think I have developed critical thinking when it comes to my writing. In many classes I have been in I have not had to think very hard about the topic I was writing about and the instructions were very straight forward. In this class we read a lot of different essays that were much harder to grasp and our instructions were really to think critically about these articles and write about them. I also feel I have a better understanding for MLA citations now after doing this research paper. Lastly I feel like I have a much better knowledge of all of our college goals and learning outcomes, I am now able to cite MLA, research and analyze scholarly articles, integrate material into my research, and consider different aspects when researching. I feel my research paper and blog is contributing to the scholarly discourse by researching a topic that is not a very common researched item. I also feel I'm contributing strong scholarly evidence in my essay that helps to support my argument and that my essay could be very helpful to other students who may be looking into researching a topic like mine. This research paper has really given me an understanding of what a scholarly research paper should look like and has helped me to have confidence that I am able to write scholarly articles.

Thursday, May 9, 2013

Critical Reflection V

After receiving my rough draft back, I'm starting to understand all that I need to do in order to make my final draft much better. I need to start by making a reverse outline, where I put my major arguments in the order I would like them, and start putting in other scholarly evidence to support my claim. My essay really needs help organizationally and I think doing the reverse outline will really help me. Other comments my professor asked me to work on were, looking into Freud's "The Uncanny" as a source, also finding more scholarly articles, my professor in my essay also pointed out that many paragraphs should be switched around, for instance when I talk about the Puritan and Romantic period I need to begin with this. My professor is asking me to rewrite a little about the Puritan age and Romantic period, she's also asking me to expand on many of my paragraphs for example she is thinking that I may want to make one of my comments which was, "This may be a message to our culture that any resolved issues we have we need to deal with," and make this into it's own section instead of just a comment. Two of the goal my professor highlighted were, 1. supporting a thesis using credible, appropriate, accurate and sufficient source material. My professor highlighted this because in my essay I started using material that was not scholarly, for instance I used The Free Dictionary for one of my citings. Instead I need to use the library and find a more reliable and credible source for my paper. Another goal she had was 2. Consider multiple perspectives. In my paper I have not added many others perspectives and I need to work on that. I think making a reverse outline will help me to find out where I have a need for multiple perspectives. I feel all of the goals she highlighted were not in my essay and I really need to work on them. I can revise my essay to fulfill these goals by starting with a in depth outline, that will help me make sure I have many of the goals, and also by doing more research so I can have a well- supported argument. I think doing both of these things will help my essay become credible and organized.  

Tuesday, April 30, 2013

Critical Reflextion 4

When writing my Research Paper I used many different goals, three of the main goals I think I used were, thinking, reading, and writing. My first goal, thinking, I feel I used by reading different articles to have a better understanding for my topic and for having a better understanding of other views that are associated with my topic. Also when doing my research I considered different perspectives of the people that may be reading my essays. For instance I know that many people who may be looking at my essay are in college so they have a general understanding for many key topics that I am talking about so I know I do not need to go into great depth when describing something. I also now have worked to understand how to better understand and evaluate evidence. For instance when I first started I watched movies for my main research but I did not know how to evaluate them properly. After working on understanding the movie better and talking to my peers about it I know have a better understanding for this. My next goal is reading. I struggled with analyzing articles and understanding where the data was coming from in the beginning of this semester. With help from my teacher and peers I now know how to find where the data a article is from and how important it is to find out about the articles author before writing. I also have a better understanding for analyzing, mostly be trial and error. When I first started my movie analysis's were way to long and then piece by piece I learned how to shorten them, while still keeping the valuable information. My last goal that I will be covering is my writing  goal. Before starting this class I struggled with developing well supported arguments and refuting counter arguments. I have now learned how to do this, something that helped me a lot with supporting my arguments were the essays that we did in the beginning, like "The Weir" these essays helped me because they required a lot of thought and they made me really work towards a strong argument. I also have been able to identify, narrow and develop a topic that is appropriate for my research paper, I did this by looking up interesting topics, and in class we did an activity that really helped me narrow down what I should write about (bubble). lastly with my research paper I am now learning how to support a thesis using credible, appropriate, accurate, and sufficient source material. Supporting my thesis has been a bit of a challenge for me and finding credible material has also been a little challenging. The class discussion that we did on thesis's helped me understand more of what a thesis was and also having a general understanding of the importance of a scholarly article before I started this semester helped a lot.

Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Critical Reflection III

In conducting my research I did a cultural analysis where I watched the movies "The Exorcist" and "The Ring". My results from my research were showing how the child in the movie scared us, by what they wore, how they talked, and what they did. My results showed that when the child did something we could never imagine a child doing that's when we were given the most fright. For example in "The Exorcist" when Regan is possessed there is a scene when she is says she is the devil and talks very sexual. This scene was very repulsing, it was hard to watch a child do something like this. My primary research will help me with my research question because I am finding out on my own why children in a horror film scare me and how they do it, I can then compare that to other peoples findings.The connections I see between my secondary and primary research are in some of the secondary sources they talked about these two movies. With these secondary sources I will be able to compare my findings to the findings of someone else. The differences of my secondary sources and primary research are, some of the research is trying to find out different parts of the movie that scare us and not focusing on the child scaring us, and I am focusing just on the child. My ideas as of right now in structuring my research paper are to start out with one of the movies that I have watched and explain a frightening scene to catch the audiences attention. I will then explain why this scene scares us so much. I will organize my secondary and primary research by supporting the primary research that I did on my own with secondary research that I found. I will also use some secondary research and go more in depth about what they are talking about and use my primary research to support that.

Thursday, April 11, 2013

Annotated Bibliography Feedback

The feedback I received from my annotated bibliography was altogether very good. My summaries and analyses were focused and she could tell that I really tried to stick to my research question, but allowed myself to deviations when something interested me or suggested a new direction. The only thing that may be a problem is how some of the sources discuss several different movies, and I may need to watch the movies in order to get  a real understanding from where they are coming from. I feel that I have very good articles for my secondary research, I may have to view a few more in order to make my research paper well thought out. The sources that I may use are more articles from MLA Bibliography, and two books that I have gotten through Inner Library Loan. I will use these sources because MLA Bibliography seems to have the best scholarly articles for my topic, and the books I have gotten may have valuable information that I can use in my paper.

Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Essay III-- primary research


The primary research I decided to do was to watch two different horror films that centered around the child becoming possessed. I chose the movies, "The Ring" and "The Exorcist". I watched the movies over the weekend and over this week I am hoping to further examine them. I hope to answer questions like, what are the camera angles they shot the child at, how does the child act before/after becoming possessed, is any music playing, and are children's toys present? This will help my research paper by helping me to explain why children in scary movies frighten us so much because I can evaluate what they do in the movies that frighten us. My secondary research influenced me to choose movies because many of the articles I read also examined horror movies. Yes I see many connections between my primary and secondary research for example one of the articles talked about the movie "The Ring" and that influenced me to watch the movie "The Ring" to even further examine it. The choices I made in developing my primary research was deciding which movies to watch and what questions to ask myself. I already said a few of the questions I asked but a few others I may ask are, where the story takes place, and how the parents play a role in the child's like. I took notes during these movies and the questions I have I will be answering in my notebook. In my research I may also talk about the movie "The Woman In Black."